Are We Falling In Love? Poem by Kareem Hany

Are We Falling In Love?

Rating: 5.0


Are we falling in love?
i was still thinking

I was looking for her
while my phone started ringing

that's her name i noticed
and i saw her eyes blinking

I was hiding a flower
she asked ' what are you bringing? ! '

she was smiling at me
and said ' stars are winking ;) '

sure we're in love
what was i thinking? !

we didn't expect that
but now we're linking

Her hands are in mine
and they looked shrinking

we felt our souls flying
and our hearts dinging

we love each other so much
and we will keep singing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

ve felt our souls flying and our hearts dinging we love each other so much and we will keep singing .... that is real indicaion of falling inlove.. nice poetry with good feelings. i read it second time

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Kranthi Pothineni 02 December 2009

Love is trembling happiness.

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Kesav Easwaran 26 November 2009

Sweet and beautiful love feelings Kareem...the rhyme and rhythm just come out your way...like a flowing stream...spontaneous natural...good work...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 November 2009

we love each other so much and we will keep singing........................ya thatis whatone loves or longsinwholelife... really beautiful poem.....10 read mine...anywher....butter flies around....i miss... final act

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The Lost.. 07 November 2009

nice rythm and well written, touchable and meaningful too :)

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