Are You Positive Poem by Lu Vernezze

Are You Positive

Rating: 4.5


Do you think of me at all?
You say you do
But are you sure?
Are you positive?

Do you need me at all?
You say you do
But are you sure?
Are you positive?

Do you want me at all?
You say you do
But are you sure?
Are you positive?

Cos you know that my feelings for you
Can't dissapear
You know i love you more
Than i explain here
In these word
But i'm sure
I'm positive

I just like to be reassured
I need you to stay here
For me to know that i'm yours

You say that you love me
But are you sure?
Are you positive?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 29 June 2008

Well, if he doesn't love you I do. I'm sure, I'm positive. Just keep writing this good poetry and I'll stay until your ink runs out, then I'm outta here. I gave this another 9. Frankly because I have an excuse not to give you a 10. You used the lower case I (i) several times. You still wouldn't get a ten, but it does give me a reason not to. Absolutely tremendous presentation! GW62

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