Are You There Poem by shreya chauhan

Are You There

Rating: 2.0


confused but determined to clear my doubts
'are you there? ' i shouted at the top of my voice
'yes my child' came a sound calm and loud
he had to answer me further...today, he had no choice
'prove it! tell me your whereabouts'
'but you can find me everywhere, just...look around'
'i want proof, prove your existence'
'well, to answer your queries is my duty,
and it seems today is my only chance.

i am the creator of the universe you survive in,
you are the result of my powers,
the stars, the moon, the mountains are all mine,
i punish the guilty, i change the day into night, i bring rain showers.
now, my child, don't doubt my existence anymore
and let me make you remind
i am not speaking from anywhere else
i am the voice of your heart and mind'

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
god, is inside us....we all just fail to realize that, we search him everywhere else but within...the day we start realizing our potentials will be the day we will stop looking for happiness around us...because then we would have found... ourselves
my English teacher gave us a few topics so that we can test our writing skills, this one appealed to me the most. then i did not think that i'll be asking this question to god...but when i started penning down, it just came to me...and flowed out of my pen... my teacher....if she had never provided me with the platform, i don't think i would have written a poem on this particular topic. but my poem...i dedicate to god...because he is all that there is
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shreya Chauhan 08 March 2013

thanks aswath raman for your kind words... and little king of sorrows i definitely agree with every word of yours

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Little King Of Sorrows 07 March 2013

A question I have asked many times. A statement of proof I have asked for ever more. But he is omnipresent and worthy of the time you take to call to him. I pray he shows you his existence more everyday. Wonderful praise to the Man Upstairs. Bravo

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