Aroma Of The Spirit Poem by Ayni Poet

Aroma Of The Spirit

Rating: 5.0


Pierce the layers of colors,
Strip the shapes of their particular outlines,
Feel a contactless touch,
Allow the intermission to enlarge
Until the musical notes quit beating,
Loosen the appetite for distinguishing odors,
Live free of a personal core,
Discover blissfulness instead of pleasure,
Erase the knowledge and the pompous concepts,
Detach from the mind's control,
Enjoy now a truthful you,
Polished of virtues and luminescent,
Dip into the aroma of Spirit!

Friday, July 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,self,spirit,transcendent
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 06 July 2018

The Aroma Of The Spirit is a refined poem with the perfect choice of words. I cite here your lines: Discover blissfulness instead of pleasure...........................Enjoy now a truthful you, and finally in the end................... Polished of virtues and luminescent, Dip into the aroma of Spirit! YES, INTO The AROMA of Spirit! WOW! This must make any reader feel uplifted. God's Blessings in Abundance and a 10 +++++++++++++ for the vote.

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