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Portrait Of A Lover

Rating: 4.1

I paint you in vibes,
In light, in symbols and in dark,
In fullness and in emptiness,
Without space or time,
Across the endless flow of the smooth sky.

The middle way is always there,
A path that you (Beloved) created,
I walk on it with complete balance,
As I depart towards a palace.

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Saturday, April 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: consciousness,spiritual
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A B Faniki 07 October 2019

I superb and brilliantly crafted. I enjoyed it imnensely. Great write

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 15 January 2019

beautiful lines well articulated. dipiction of the lover is wonderful and lovely no i no you we're one, untouched, unspoken lovely.

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Chinedu Dike 07 June 2017

Beautiful depiction of spiritual experience that is love, well articulated and elegantly brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Ayni.

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Ayni Artistique 08 June 2017

You're very welcome! I'm glad the essence of it reached you. Thank you for the feedback. Blessings!

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 May 2017

I‘m diving in your depths, in mine, I feel your gentle pulse, Coming from no-where, Staying as no-thing, Sublime, Absolute. this is for me a spiritual and mystical poem. it is so rare to read such a work in poemhunter. sometimes i have longing to read such works.. thank you dear poet. love ur poem.

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Saint Cynosure 22 April 2017

This is really good work...

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 April 2017

What a poetic line! I turn myself to you, the Self itself. Thanks.

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