As I Am The Candle In The Wind .................. (11) Comments

As beautiful and lyrical this poem is, I keep coming back to the first stanza and I am riveted to it because it states: 'The beauty when impaled by the dagger of age' reminds me so much of a lot of women reaching middle age and when they have no substance and strength and they just rely on their fading superficial beauty - they feel like age is a curse to them. I realize this poem is different to a lot of people and it is truly beautiful. Bravo! ! Dr. Kar

I read your poem As I AM The Candle In The Wind, its a wonderful poem, very beautifully written, very complete and descriptive. your words have the magical power to take the reader within the lines and feel the charm of poetry. keep spreading peace and love through your words.

PALLAVI MISHRA A beautifully framed poem, the 4th paragraph being the best

marvelous........... I am the candle in the air tossing up in the wind May be like a rain bequeathing the smiles agile each line so wonderfully framed........love ur poems sir.......thnx for sharing