As I Lay In This State Comments

this poem is awesome i love poetry you should check out some of my poetry too you are a creative writer and i would like to get to know you.........i like getting to know people

Very nice my friend, interesting poem of hope. I agree w/ some of the comments below, you have a gift to develop

i like it, very nice; ]

you do have a real writting gift i really hope that you write more cause you are really great i love this poem

Beautifully written. You have a gift for writting! Write more! ! ! !