When I meet you in thin air spread over a time
Yet ever extending, . I rock you in quest of love
You sneak to me to my soul more deeper within
Shimmering like an angel with magical wings
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Dr Subhendu, you poems are really nice, each competing the other. i like this slab especially as a beautiful revelation of love and the smooth flowing of love which you have amazingly potrayed from your words bonded me till the end.. i loved it. thanks for sharing... ric
Hello Dr subhendu kar, Very sensitively... Fine poems... Thanks you for the comment... Kindest regards, Tsira
Very well chosen Beauty filled words....and extremily romantic and an enjoyable read that pulls you in and makes you remember when you feel like your floating and in Love.It feels amazing doesn't it..... Keep sharing I Love the words you string together most likely with little effort. ((Smile)) at least that is what it seems when the reader pours over them. Take care of u Shelley
dr shahib you sound like a famous urdu poet faiz ahmed faiz, same romanticism same beauty and imagination
Real happiness is above the senses. It is supramental spiritual sense. With the gross senses what we enjoy If your dream is to join your Groom in a sacred circle after a ride through the woods on a white horse...wow once again its very beautiful, i salute you! greetings :) Mary
divine love.........placing ur lover to the status of an angel, having magical wings, that rings all buitful feelings in you. of course i loved it, gr8 wrk...10 marks from me...really lovely........
I love the imagry shown through your word usage, it flows beautifully with spiritual tones captured within, Excellent poem Dr. Subhendu Kar.--Melvina--
The ecstasy of the divine is expressed through personal passion in this boldly flowing poem with some fascinating images - 'thin air spread over time', 'you sneak into my soul'. Playful yet always with reverence. Beautiful poem. love, Allie xxxx
Beautiful work with spiritual tones throughout. Nicely done! Lilly :)
beautiful poem filled by warm passion and needs..enjoyed the reading...10+++++