TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
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TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila . Comments
Your poem was full of emotion and i enjoyed reading it very much ^^ but the unneccessary capital words somewhat forced your message in a way of a turn off. Since this poem has a great and powerful message, you did a very impressive job in setting forth emotion to bring this piece alive. =)
READ IT.THANK YOU FOR THE INVITE, THAT POEM REALLY BRIGHTENED ME UP, AS SO I GOT UP TO READ A LITTLE MORE, N WRITE.10S. BESIDES IN THE MIDDLE, N FIGHTING TIMES, I JUST FINISHED 6ACTS/ROLES..DO ME THE HONOR OF BEING THE 1ST 2 READ EM
Tamara I read and think you are a great person that I could have met in my lifetime...that is done as we meet on the street of poemhunter.
Alot of feeling and true life events in your poem. It must have been quite difficult in some parts to write. Amazing how you stayed as the one orphan. Very impresive poem and well done.look forward to your next one. keep up the great writing.
Interesting style the way you play with rhyme, reminds me of dada poems which does not sems to make too much sense but actually makes lots of sense.
POETS HAVE ONE THING IN COMMON. LOVE FOR THE PEOPLE AND THEY ARE LIKE SOLDIERS IN WAR.THEY RESCUE EACH OTHER, HELP EACH OTHER AND DIE FOR THE WHOLE COMMUNITY.THANK YOU FOR BEING A POET.
The Best Poem Of TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
In His Heart A Golden Chair
(A great one while calling his barroness by these names...)
It was a scent...BUT not just any, ...
her scent filled the air
see breeze,
It was jasmine of lady faire
his contessa in the wind...singing him
.dancing love, and the feet dancing bare,
on the sound of his laughter, with the joy of her hair,
lady fire always hope, lady fire who would dare,
first of year was so long, and the night was so young.
....then arrived lady faire,
loving temptress, loving him...
her prince waiting there
summer eve never leave
the magic carpet....tinker belle who would weave
, tinker belle who would care,
lady fire who would water
the waiting soul, and your life she shall share
limitless love, limitless mare, charming knight...to her declare.,
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charming knight, limitless mare..limitless love both declare
flying eagle and a raven may be odd, but united pair
their wings are bride, above the known seeking the rare
my lady doth sleep,
deeply sleep in heart of chair
as the magic calling her
little one...very deep, deeply sleep in my heart
....in my heart a golden chair
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5/20/2022 4:33:21 PM # 1.0.0.958
right on good job on the poem