~as If You Care~ Poem by water lily

~as If You Care~

Rating: 5.0


This is my first poem attempt..hope it wd get better!

As f you care...
..if im happy or in great despair

As if you care...
..if i still walk on my legs or on a wheelchair.

As if you care.
.if i am here or elsewhere..

As if you care
...if i still exist or could no longer bear..

Would you really care? !
I dont need an answer..
As I no longer care!

Tayma
12/Feb/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malcolm Edwards 27 September 2010

Fabulous, I still read, but dare not put pen to paper. 10 for you

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Vinod Kumar 25 November 2009

with the help of god, self confidence and comfort move, thanks for sharing

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