Monday, December 7, 2009

As My Prehistoric Father Did Comments

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Take my words to above
to a place of ineffable greatness
and let me behold in prayer
the unnameable God
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Gert Strydom
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Pink Butterfly ... 07 December 2009

Beautiful.... Amazing piece! ! ! ! Keep it up! ! ! God bless you! ! ! -Pink Butterfly-

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Ray Schreiber 07 December 2009

I really liked this poem. Asking for ' primordial wisdom ' is a great line, so straight to the heart of any belief. The need to shed the cloak of sophistication in order to feel the warmth exists in many matters of the heart and soul.

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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