Friday, February 27, 2015

As Our Hands Entwine Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was a cold evening, I was sipping my tea
and the cold was romancing with my tea as well with my lips
he was looking into my eyes
searching for his eternal soulmate......
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Chinedu Dike 28 February 2015

Very romantic narrative poem, well articulated and subtly penned to capture the intimacy of a moment filled with pure bliss. Love at first sight well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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