As Severe As Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

As Severe As

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It is lovely season to observe
But felt very severe
The peaks are covered with snow
We have nowhere to go

Winter has to set in
To make changes in season
So far summer had taken heavy toll
The winter may improve health call

Early morning walk
May take you on fast track
To inhale fresh air
And feel relatively fair

Body needs to adjust
As it is very robust
Some of the areas fall to zero or beyond
The water freezes in pond

It is as severe as monsoon
The heavy snow fall is witnessed in season
People enjoy to skating
Lovely couples go for dating

Thursday, November 6, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

It is lovely season to observe But felt very severe

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

Amazing Eric Reels12 minutes ago What else can I say awesome Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

Fantastic! Cassie Dean16 minutes ago Great form and selection of words. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work. Keep it up!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

Snow is so beautiful. I just love the winter as long as I have enough supplies, a good warm home, something warm to drink and someone to cuddle with. Elizabeth Mason11 minutes ago Good Write Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

Yawn Jessica Davis15 minutes ago Good try

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2014

welcome Shamenaz Shaikh and Rajani Champaneri like this. Just now · Unlike · 1 58 minutes

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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