As The Night Closes, I Fall Poem by kaushik chandrasekhar

As The Night Closes, I Fall

Rating: 4.5


Every day i wake up with a lot of energy,
then get myself prepared for the day's challenge,
i get to see many people like you,
but i turn my head straight and walk,
towards the graveyard where many live,
they have completed their tasks in life,
some complete and some incomplete,
i look at all of them in their sad state,
some have many things still to do but i ignore all of them,
my job to take care of these unlucky people,
those who lost their lives in so many ways; dont know how many,
and i convince all their loved ones........
their destiny is closing the life and opening the doors of death,
they have done many great things in life,
but nothing is going to change my destiny,
i am going to just carry on men and women with their call for death,
and i might end up in the same way and who will come? ? ? ? ?
not your love for me....not your care for me......
and every day i have my own dreams crashed to ground,
but i still live on the hopes of tommorow,
may be i might go somewhere,
but then as the night closes i fall,
to the hands of fear......

kaushik.c

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 20 July 2008

sad but insightful undertone...an impressive poem 9 grade

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