As We Lay Poem by lil lover

As We Lay



As we lay in bed
like every other night
today feels different
different
today we aren't talking
today we fought
you cheated i found out
you lied
i believed
but we knew it was true
you were falling
for someone else
i was crying
i love you

Thursday, February 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
we went through it thinking we would be fine yet we are still fighting your still cheating and im still forgiving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lil Lover 02 February 2018

I guess it’s what we all feel at one point of out lifes

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 01 February 2018

A reality of life hardly told.

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Judith Blatherwick 01 February 2018

A very moving piece, written in a very real life way. That makes it extremely relatable.

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