As Will I Poem by Kat Mitchell

As Will I

Rating: 5.0


A song starts with an idea,
So did I
A song starts with a single thought,
So too did I

A song becomes familiar
As I mature slowly
A song remains that same, no matter how many times you play it
I change.

A song slowly becomes forgotten
As I will in my old age.
A song may never be heard from again
As I may be when I am gone.

Tuesday, February 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: song
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 23 February 2016

this is beautiful, a truly great piece. i believe and it is only my humble opinion that on the very last line it should read, As I may NOT, be, when I am gone. but I truly love your poem and you deserve a 10. which I tacked on to your first one. excellent.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 February 2016

a meditation on the song. listening, forgetting. lingering, familiar. so many ideas. thank you very much dear poet. tony

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