Ashes To Ashes (For Ashleigh) Poem by Vini Carberry

Ashes To Ashes (For Ashleigh)

Rating: 4.5


Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
Slashes for slashes
Lust for lust

Beauty in the eyes
Of her beholder
But no comfort
No arms that hold her

No one to help
Her through all this
But all she wants,
Is one last kiss

One last kiss
She'll never forget
Before she goes
One kiss to never regret

For it'll be her last
Her last moment of love
before she gives up
And ascends up above

Never to be seen again
But never to be forgot
But just know before you go
To me you mean alot

And I'll miss you
I'll miss you so much
I'll cry, I'll cut, I'll bleed
etc. and such

And I'll never be
What I am now again
But I'll see you again
Up there. In heaven

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Izabelle Keaton 12 February 2010

I like the message behind the words, but sometimes rhyming to much can take away from the message...not that I know much about poetry :)

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