Asleep Poem by Chinwe Robert

Asleep

Rating: 5.0


On the road this morning
I saw two lambs lying side by side
they were fast asleep
or rather,
they were calm
and dead.
For in death, they sleep
and their souls: souless
wondering on the roads
amongst a thousand many
where their shed is a road
and their heaven, a vacuum.
For on the road this morning
I saw two lambs lying side by side
they were calm
and dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 June 2011

Great poem. Written well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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