Asylum Poem by Daniel Y.

Asylum

Rating: 5.0


They have put me in this room. This dark, quiet, lonely room.
For nine thousand years I have waited here.
Decaying ever gently into oblivion, ever so gently.
You don't know silence.
When you are locked in darkness without eyes or ears, and the walls move out of reach continually.
That place of absolutes.
My eyes sting with a hunger for light. Even just an ounce.
But it will not come for another thousand years.
Forceful thoughts will slowly penetrate my head, and I will find company in them.
The emptiness is suffocating me.
But death will not deliver. It's sweet embrace, is a forgotten fantasy; the product of a deranged mind who thought we might have some hope. Sitting on a cold concrete floor and rocking back and forth, with nothing to face but darkness for all eternity. This is silence.
My skin burns and shivers at the same time. My mind lapses. Here, I see a vast desert laughing at me, a strong wind blows sand in my face, and my skin peels off like wallpaper. Alas, it is not real! I know it is not. It is pure feeling. Feeling anything to keep me sane. Of course, I'm the sanest person around.
Trying to sleep. How it evades me! When I do dream, I dream of trying to sleep. I awake as if the dream itself never happened. Still tired and alone. But whenever I open my eyes no light meets them. Feeling as though they never opened at all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lilac Time 27 March 2014

I loved this, I felt like I was in the room when I was reading it...I like the idea that it's literal but I can also see it as being trapped in your own mind. Beautiful

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Daniel Brick 04 February 2014

This is an entirely different poem than the ones I have already read. And you know what? IT WORKS! I read it either as a poem of a dystopian society that has cruelly imprisoned the undesirables or dissenters OR as a symbolic poem exploring the issue of isolation and loneliness through the metaphor of imprisonment. It works for me in both ways. This is an ambitious poem and it must 4 times longer than your vignettes, but I found the same vivid, precise language as in the shorter poems that made this prisoner's struggle to keep his sanity from collapsing both poignant and realistic. In this century of persecution of dissidents and imprisonment of innocents (think of Nelson Mandela's 25+ year sentence) your poem is an assertion of freedom and your speaker is a FREE MAN despite his incarceration. This poem should be published by Amnesty International!

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