Wednesday, June 17, 2009

At A Restaurant Comments

Rating: 5.0

I once went to a restaurant
called the tent
somewhere in Sea point
and the owner laid a feast
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Gert Strydom
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Zeinab Sherif 19 June 2009

simple enjoyable poem,10+++.by the way, do u want some coffee?

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Marieta Maglas 19 June 2009

a cognitive metaphor: ''and every motion had a rhythm of its own.'' enclosed in a sweet, wonderful poem......10+++

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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