Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 384,069 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

At Break Point - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

At break point

I got in exchange
And managed
Your love
And drove

I knew you will remain
And maintain
My love up to an end
And send (flowers daily)

I know you will not barter
And run after
Lucrative offer
And ditch lover

Yes it is safe with you
And it is true
That you are firm
And available to confirm

It is fortunate enough
Not to run into rough
Even if at break point in life
You walked on edge of knife

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Comments about At Break Point by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (11/27/2015 9:29:00 AM)


    This is well-done! Nothing difficult here; the language is clear and it means what the words mean, not double-talk in this only the interpretation that is one for the poem to work well.

    I like the simple and the sweet of the diction. Keep on writing!

    Luis Estable
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/27/2015 9:14:00 AM)


    It is fortunate enough
    Not to run into rough
    Even if at break point in life
    You walked on edge of knife
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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 27, 2015



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