At First Poem by Azitej Anand

At First

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     Sense seems to touch my bleeding soul;        
  When someone calculates my words:
           When it comes on questions:
                'How much it pays you? '
  I squeeze my lips with piercing sword!

       '  Have you written it by yourself? '
The suspecting literate eyes,
Of the higher world;
           Exclaims my art at  lower brisk;
At there, I squeeze my heart with repentance tie.

                    'Oh! A writer;

            One, who lives in fantasy;
            One, who never tastes fact!
        Who always lives in ecstasy;
                 I squeeze my eyes!
Have you got anything from this stuff?
          As being of 24 years;
      Not earn a penny with your art
In such a way they inject in my blood  
                    the future fear'

Hard voice of business realm
             mocks at me;
 Literate one scans my mind
 And comments  'Its not your creation, a vague,
  you are too small to write'
Such dialogues  imparted on me.
 
      I squeeze my head and my hair;
     Echo of such sound
    Piercing,
Oh! piercing
          my heart, poetic layer.

At there:
I wept lot,
I wept,
I wept there a lot...


My soul traps and got squeezed;
My heart there bursts!
I lose my all senses; And, wants to be free.

At the end voice suffuses:
' Oh! Writers
They all are a veil
A veil of imaginative mirror,
All the miniature in my funeral grabs fear'

They Said..
They plead..
 Oh Lord!
 'Soothe his soul and brain wash all his poetic words! '


 Poetic and create World never ends.
In future there will be Shakespeare,
There will be Keats:
Although, I Will not there
  But such an art never beats.

At First
Monday, February 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
'At First', in a dramatic monologue form asserts the pang of poets and writers. Our society is standing on the carnalist sword and the speculation of each individual shifts toward the layer of materialism else of going through the deep meaning of lines they mark a stupid question like How much your poetic art pays you? Even if you write some piece of splendid work than some higher class wants to suppress you by saying in a dumb way ' This piece of work not belongs to you or you have not written it. The poem in an illustrative way is the best example of Antithesis.
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