Azitej Anand

Freshman - 773 Points (08/04/1990 / India)

Goodbye! - Poem by Azitej Anand

I was asleep lying on the floor,
And adorned with lovely flowers;
Peculiar things were there,
When with a core heart they bathed me in a blessing showers:

I don't know what the strange things were going at my house;
Like an infant, I was upraised on shoulders;
Each and everyone was there,
All those who loves me, were with lots of loving rose to bid me Goodbye, mere:

Indeed each and everyone who loves me was there; .
Still, I was called by their mouth
with shriek diluted with deep torment fear;
All of them flowed tears,
Causes profound calmness instead of fear.

Who never wants to pluck my face, on that day was there;
With an embellished loving heart;
How can I be loved and tributed by thy mouths and hearts?
How can I? This induces in my eyes materialistic fear.

I don't know, why they had stunned by my calm face;
Why they astonished by seeing me asleep? ;
Oh! With a groaning and deep torment, Why were they awaking me from my dreams of peep? :

Each phase and soul,
Starts wobbling there, by seeing me;
Where I was made asleep forever;
Those who have a strong love for me,
From those hands, I was made buried forever and ever!

Topic(s) of this poem: elegy, sad

Form: Elegy

Poet's Notes about The Poem

The poem 'Goodbye ' in a dirge style, which is an elegy form of poem marks an antithesis, as the heading reveals a farewell bye or goodbye but the poem is juxtapose of the heading that one is assigned to it. The poem sparks a mournful scene of dead body, as it passes through great symbolism, elegy, dirge and antithesis which embarks poem a mournful face and taste.

Comments about Goodbye! by Azitej Anand

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/21/2015 3:14:00 PM)

    The poem sparks a mournful scene of dead body,
    Poet's note about the poem is the best comment. I fully agree with him.................10
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    Azitej Anand (3/22/2015 12:19:00 PM)

    Thanks a lot sir, praise from such a great, honourable and legendary personality is in itself a great great motivation for me, and i don't know what else to say.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 21, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 30, 2015

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