Azitej Anand

Freshman - 676 Points (08/04/1990 / India)

Weeping Candle! - Poem by Azitej Anand

Candle light; weeps to furnish,
The transparency veil; that adds lusture;
Candle overlapped by white customs;
Ah! Standing there at middle joins the lovers:

Candle blaze adds wings to soot;
Soot an unwanted fear: fear of parting, pain;
Carbon soot to strangle bond; but, deep heart radiant to put vow!
All these burns by the candle, weeping and standing in middle there:

Eyes stare each other;
Pierce the grudge layer,
Hands put their owe by crossing there fingers,
In the purple moon light! Ah! Candle weeps to bind heart:

To revive the dead one;
Candle burns; and, at the end;
When Candle top kisses bottom;
It looses soots to fuse fiance in strong love roots!

Topic(s) of this poem: love and art


Poet's Notes about The Poem

'Weeping candle', with it's euphoric and symbolic essence enliven a scene of profound love by means of following a romantic traditiom of burning candle between them. The overall poems shows the how candle blends two soul in to a one by letting itself in to soot.

Comments about Weeping Candle! by Azitej Anand

  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (9/27/2015 2:35:00 AM)


    Poem on candle lights ends at bottom, fantastic (Report) Reply

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  • Azitej Anand (3/12/2015 11:07:00 PM)


    Thanks for appreciating my piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (3/11/2015 3:13:00 AM)


    Poetic thoughts on candle. Loved it. (Report) Reply

    Azitej Anand Azitej Anand (3/12/2015 11:09:00 PM)

    Thanks for appreciating my piece of work.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 10, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, March 16, 2015


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