Weeping Candle! Poem by Azitej Anand

Weeping Candle!

Rating: 4.8


Candle light; weeps to furnish,
The transparency veil; that adds lusture;
Candle overlapped by white customs;
Ah! Standing there at middle joins the lovers:

Candle blaze adds wings to soot;
Soot an unwanted fear: fear of parting, pain;
Carbon soot to strangle bond; but, deep heart radiant to put vow!
All these burns by the candle, weeping and standing in middle there:

Eyes stare each other;
Pierce the grudge layer,
Hands put their owe by crossing there fingers,
In the purple moon light! Ah! Candle weeps to bind heart:

To revive the dead one;
Candle burns; and, at the end;
When Candle top kisses bottom;
It looses soots to fuse fiance in strong love roots!

Weeping Candle!
Tuesday, March 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
'Weeping candle', with it's euphoric and symbolic essence enliven a scene of profound love by means of following a romantic traditiom of burning candle between them. The overall poems shows the how candle blends two soul in to a one by letting itself in to soot.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madathil Rajendran Nair 11 March 2015

Poetic thoughts on candle. Loved it.

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Azitej Anand 12 March 2015

Thanks for appreciating my piece of work.

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Azitej Anand 12 March 2015

Thanks for appreciating my piece of work.

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Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer Channel 27 September 2015

Poem on candle lights ends at bottom, fantastic

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 04 November 2023

Great concluding lines. Loved those words

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Bharati Nayak 01 November 2023

Wow--What a beauty is this poem!

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 29 May 2018

I like this line. Candle light, weeps to furnish, The transparency veil, that adds lustre. Beautiful artwork in overall. 10+, I vote

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 May 2018

Yeah here the light of candle makes the two loving souls ONE. nice theme 10+++

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Britte Ninad 29 May 2018

nicely ended- When Candle top kisses bottom; It looses soots to fuse fiance in strong love roots! nice 10++++

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