Monday, April 4, 2016

At Last the New Arriving Comments

Rating: 4.6

Like the horn you played in Catholic school
the city will open its mouth and cry
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Gabrielle Calvocoressi
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Rajnish Manga 17 April 2016

It's a pleasure reading this poem and enjoying the music coming out of the tingling words. Looks like a celebration of some lovely relationships. Thank you, Gabrielle Calvocoressi.

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Susan Williams 17 April 2016

I like her style. She's a bit like Faulkner set to poetic verse. Very original thoughts expressed in a very original manner. but it's not a private party, she brings her reader along.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 April 2016

It will feel better than any floor. Nice work.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 April 2016

Dance until your bones clatter. What a prize you are. What a lucky sack of stars. very nice thoughts and use of words and the flow.. thank you very much. tony

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