Now I am old
I think back
to my youth
when a rip tide
caught me
and swept me
farther and farther
out to sea.
Things looked bad
for a long, long,
time.
The only good thing
I can say
was that I was
remarkably patient.
I didn't fight the tide
or panic,
or exhaust myself.
I swam parallel
to shore
for years,
lost my youth,
my looks, my health,
but paddled on,
and in time
saw an opening,
rode a wave
to shore.
I was so persistent.
I had no idea
I could be
so persistent.
Any rational man
would have drowned
years before.
Or am I
still out there,
still persisting?
Still drowning?
A beautiful comparison of life's struggles. Loved your poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A well conveyed poem.... Truly touching and poetic....5 stars*****