Wednesday, September 12, 2018

Atoms And The Soul Comments

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I am an atom, I am the atomic nucleus,
My neutrons are blamed, my protons are dismayed.
This side of the story is true and exact,
For leanings to rivers define the matter and energy.
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Naveed Akram
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

Your comparison about atom and soul is wonderful. Atom is not seen. Soul is also invisible. Soul has love and purity within. Soul is very tiny as tiny as an atom. An Amazing poem is brilliantly and excellently penned.10

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 12 September 2018

GOOD POEM...............

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