Friday, October 9, 2009

Atonement. Comments

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When neglect has
.......................... riven trust,
.................................... despair wins.
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Fay Slimm
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Brenda Arroyo 19 October 2009

Your short usage of words described something beautiful.

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Bob Gibson 09 October 2009

No questions asked, there are no lies, a masquerade of human sighs if only, why not me! the questions of eternity for a brief spell gold is found, noticed by those around , an inward smile, a secret cast, a reason, a season, may it last

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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