Luz EtchemendiGaray

Rookie (Parana, Entre Rios Argentina)

Audacity - Poem by Luz EtchemendiGaray

Summer brought you with the tide,
cast you on my beach,
garbed in boldness
When I saw you I discovered a microcosmos,
a cumulus of hidden emotions,
The evening star accompanied our path
and we were seduced by the moon,
our moon.

Today I hear your voice and I am moved,
in spite of the Ocean
because I know that you call to me,
without calling me-
in every page you read.

(Traslated by Daniel Ginhson, Sue Littleton and the Author.)


Comments about Audacity by Luz EtchemendiGaray

  • Segun Johnson Ozique (9/3/2012 6:39:00 PM)


    Wow. Starve me all day, ... just give me such love in measured metrical and like doggy, will follow you to the end of the world. Beautiful, Luz. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/28/2012 11:19:00 AM)


    Great use of imagery and rare insight into a staring aspect of life are felt here. Good poem Luz EtchemendiGray! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, September 3, 2012


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