The grey of mountains cold,
Is melting into gold,
The rough—barren quarry,
Dawns a robe of glory,
Trees of frozen lightning,
Are sudden dress'd like kings,
The bare mountaintop still,
Now with much wonder fills,
The sun is burning nigh,
It gilds the azure sky,
It gives me a crown of gold,
It warms my body cold,
It spills diamonds in the grass,
I wish that dawn would nev'r pass.
Thank you, Soran for your very kind words and thought through review! God bless!
It is beautiful—capturing the magic of nature and a reflection of the self. Both in form and content, it is a delicate and refined piece. Wishing you continued happiness and brilliance.
It spills diamonds in the grass, I wish that dawn would nev'r pass.
Thank you Rose Marie for the thoughtful and reflective comments! God bless and have a lovely day! I always appreciate your reviews : )
Again and Endless stream of 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++
Such beauty all the way through! .. Thank you for sharing such imagery and awe for your readers to experience with you so to speak! ..
Oh Wow! .. Absolutely Breathtaking! .. Such Glory and Awe! .. With feelings ever so amazing! ..
You are an artist with your craft! Well, well done on this poem! It truly is fabulous! I love the impeccable rhymes and metre! This is one of your best-written yet!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This poem made me feel the sunrise with it's warm lines and bright wording! What a well composed piece, vivid and sensational!