Susan Ash

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Autumn Vision

Poem by Susan Ash

White sunlight sparkling
Through the leaves of the willow,
Dancing on the water flowing by.
The black silhouette of one man fishing,
All this catches my eye.

Seized by the
Beauty and drama,
For a instant a part of this scene,
I glow with feelings of pleasure,
In love with our world once again.

This must be
A glimpse of heaven,
Feels so good to be alive,
Grateful for the gift of seeing
With a heart that is open wide.

Want to stay,
Stretch this moment,
Know it will pass all too soon.
Not long before I’m returned
To others in worlds full of gloom.

But now
When I pass that way again
This vision returns to my mind,
Brightening the grey days of winter,
Leaving all sadness behind.


Comments about Autumn Vision by Susan Ash

  • Ernestine NorthoverErnestine Northover (5/16/2007 3:57:00 PM)

    This one is exceptionally beautiful Susan, the flow is perfect and the words weave so well through it. Loved it.
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjrFrank James Ryan Jr...fjr (4/15/2007 5:24:00 AM)

    Capturing work, Susan...Vivid depiction & mellifluous structure well employed.
    Solid crafting, young lady!

    ~ F.j.R. ~(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 15, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, February 14, 2011