Monday, August 22, 2016

Awful Endings Without Starts Comments

Rating: 4.8

Awful endings without starts..
The battle rages between life and ceaseless death..
To win or to lose nothing will change..
Because dying hope will witness no birth..
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Anas Amsha
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Jazib Kamalvi 22 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Anas A. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Malcolm Two 23 August 2016

I liked your poem and I will be waiting for more poems by you. Keep up

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Anas Amsha 23 August 2016

Thank you very much my friend. I'm so happy you liked my poem. Have a good day

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Kelly Kurt 23 August 2016

A dark and emotional piece, Anas. Thanks

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Anas Amsha 23 August 2016

All thanks to you Mr. Kelly, i feel so much glad for your comment. Have a good day.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 August 2016

Eternal punishment for human sin beautifully elaborated in this profound and thought provoking verse. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Anas Amsha 23 August 2016

Thank you very much for the encouraging words. Have a good day

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Anas Amsha 23 August 2016

Thank you very much for your encouraging words. Best regards

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