Chenou Liu

Awkward Silence Tanka - Poem by Chenou Liu

three words
then an awkward silence
between us...
the woodpecker's knock
echoing through the trees

Topic(s) of this poem: relationship, silence

Form: Tanka

Comments about Awkward Silence Tanka by Chenou Liu

  • Spock The Vegan (11/25/2015 11:34:00 AM)

    My first encounter with a Tanka. I wote some Haikus in my poem Seven Farm Haikus. I like the 5 lines better. I may have to try it. Nice job. Thanks (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/25/2015 8:30:00 AM)

    And this silence speaks more than words....Superb tanka, I enjoyed it 10++ (Report) Reply

Read all 2 comments »

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 25, 2015

[Report Error]