Azure Sky Poem by ritty patnaik

Azure Sky

Rating: 5.0


invigourating! walk,
in the park,
takes away
the dullness of summer,
simmerlng heat of the day
gradually melting,
in sweat and grime, as i sprawl
in the grass.....carefree,
look up at the clear sky,
and feel
natures beautiful blessing.

a roof on mankind!

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' roof on mankind' is such a beautiful line. lovely poem you deserve a 10 +

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Raj Nandy 17 July 2009

This 'azure sky' has always inspired me! And also many others who write poetry! With its changing hues, it beckons and calls, As we all remain sheltered under its blue vault! Madam, when you get time kindly read my 'Visions of The Vast Blue Empyrean', And for your poem a deserving Ten! - Raj Nandy

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 16 June 2009

Very artistic expressions indeed, Ritty ji..............

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Marieta Maglas 11 June 2009

''look up at the clear sky, and feel natures beautiful blessing.'' well written..10++

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