As I See, Life And Death Poem by ritty patnaik

As I See, Life And Death

Rating: 4.0


life and death,
two sides of a coin
alternately,
following eachother.

life....
another name,
for staying alive, means
different things
to different people.
for me, for you,
for other people!

for the lover,
it is the sweet nothings,
whispered by the beloved
in his ears.,
or the sweet calling of the koel,
for its mate!

for the poet, food
for his thoughts,
expressions and feelings.

life for the farmer,
a promise of rain,
for a good crop next year.

for a prostitute,
waiting to sell,
to fend for her family,
hardships, better known to her.

for the city dwellers,
life means, to be on toes,
morning to evening, without respite,
having no time,
to stand and stare.

for me life,
a sweet babble of babies,
butterflys in their wings,
caring thoughts of loved ones
it can be a love song,
old letters of lifetime attachments!


death.......a negative utterance
which one does not want to hear.
a uninvited entry to a peaceful life.,
last phase of all beings.
the permanent rest house,
for tired travellers.

an end of wishes and dreams,
argument of a dissatisfied person.

but, in the language of soothsayers,
it is the emancipation of a knowing heart,
for the soul eternal bliss.

for the material world,
it is thethe fragrance of jasmine,
plucked as a gift
to the unknown.! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Pandey 28 July 2009

ma'm...I eco your thoughts......a fine thoughtful poem...I loved it..10

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Bob Blackwell 26 July 2009

Ritty, I like your eighth stanza best, the whole poem shows you have compassion and empathy for all you see. Life is a blessing to enjoy, death is all the ugliness caused by the greed for far too many things. I quote K. Gibran again, because I find this verse quite beautiful: - 'A little while, and my longing shall gather dust and foam for another body. A little while, a moment of rest upon the wind, and another woman shall bear me.' Warm regards Bob

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Rakesh Bedi 23 July 2009

True, life means differently to different people. But, death means same to all; i.e. end of everything, nothingness, being dissolving into non-being!

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