Babu's Touch Poem by Anabahati Mlay

Babu's Touch

Rating: 4.5


Sitting there, next to him
In silence
Holding hands, listening to the sounds of us breathing, his being heavier
In silence

Trying to detect his feelings, maybe what he would have said to me
If he was to say anything
And there it was
Peace, peace found through pain
His breathing got louder
And I hold in my breath, look at his face
I see what I saw earlier..peace
Only through God this kind of peace can be found
I look at him and say
Look here grandpa!
It is raining outside
And he smiles and his gripping on my hand increased
Isn't that beautiful, how we can all find joy through what we always take for granted
When every little thing, even a simple taking in of breath is a struggle
But someone still hold on and manage a smile, that's strength..strength and hope
It takes courage too And we all have it now
And everytime I walk out as iam doing now I feel so alive, strong and hopeful
Isn't that what he would want us all to be

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My grandpa passed away a week ago. He was staying with us and has been sick for a long time. I saw him going from his best to his worst and saw him going away peacefully. he was a great friend and an inspiration to me. Though he could not speak anymore he expressed himself in so many ways to include through his very lovely smile.I wrote this poem months ago when i was spending time with him in his room and i do treasure those moments we had.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 11 April 2015

I like the way you portrayed the communicative silence felt between both of you and the absolute tranquillity that ensued as you sat very close to him while he was sick. It's a nice poem written with insight. Thanks for sharing.

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