Sunday, March 6, 2005

Bad Day Comments

Rating: 3.6

Slashed,
blood on the wall.
Raped,
ripped open shirt.
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David Lomenick
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Moriah Cyr 22 June 2005

This is my first review. I don't feel qualified for the most part to comment on anyone else's poetry. I did however have to say something this time. I loved this poem. I loved it. I'm not a great fan of drawn out hard to understand poetry. I'm a simpleton I guess. :) I got the full picture, and that I think, is what it's all about.

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