Badal Comments

Mere tan man dono jalte hayn tum aakar aag bujha jao, Hathon ko uthao zara ooper, Angrai zata lo tum hans kar, Main chupkar tumko dekhoon ga, Lovely poem. No where else you will find clouds (Badal) so beautifully personified than here in this poem. Extremely wonderful portrayal. Thanks.

Tum bijli mujhpe gira dena, Chaho to mujhko jala dena, Lekin madira barsa dena, Han meri peyas bujha dena, ......Fantastic. I like these four lines very much. Well description in hindi language. Thanks for sharing. ....10

Badalon ki tarah dil pe barasti hui ek khoobsoorat nazm...................10