Bain3 Poem by Landrey

Bain3



I glimpse her face
heart quickens pace
I move that way
but tongue won't say,
'you're wonderful
and beautiful'
that's all I've got
the speech-forgot
and yet she breaks
please no more fakes
'please won't you be
just real with me? ? '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jonzo Bandwagoner 12 April 2007

Wow! This is really, really good... such emotion and strength, and the reader finds it very applicable to his own situation. Keep it up!

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