Monday, October 12, 2009

Balance Comments

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Those born into bliss
Surrounded and comforted
Don't believe in life without it
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Judy Jones
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Biff Jeffries 12 October 2009

I REALLY like this. Beautiful poem about the uncertainty of life and even our own minds. Your choice of words is great and you totally convey the mindstate you're in. I love the title...Balance...somthing we're all striving so hard for. 'My rationality fades in and out My sanity is on the stand Can you stick to the story? Or is your journey too confusing for even you to understand' I LOVE this part. Brilliant work.

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