Balance Of Life - Good And Bad Poem by Micron Jan

Balance Of Life - Good And Bad

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A person maintains a balance of feeling,
Some bring destruction, others bring healing.
Some give great joy, while others bring pain,
Some leave us laughing, some drenched in rain.

A balance of life exists for us all,
We rise to great heights, then inevitably fall.
These are two extremes, ever so vast,
To know one fully, the other must last.

If we never felt the warmth of light,
Darkness would conquer, leaving no fight.
Opposites dwell, always side by side,
Joy and sorrow, in life's ebbing tide.

So when it feels that all is lost,
And life's meaning seems tossed,
Remember, though bad, the good is near,
Have faith, keep trying, and hope will appear.

Monday, December 22, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
xplores the duality of human experience, highlighting how joy and sorrow, light and darkness, are intertwined and essential to understanding life's full spectrum. It conveys a hopeful message: even in moments of despair, the possibility of joy remains, encouraging resilience and faith. The poem's strengths lie in its relatable themes, clear message, and uplifting ending, while areas for improvement iOverall, a reflective and inspiring piece that reminds readers to embrace life's contrasts and keep moving forward.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 21 June 2017

Problem of good and evil, light and darkness, God and devil....... a perennial problems which all the poets and philosphers dealt with you are dealing it in this poem marvellously. thank you dear poetess. a fine poem indeed. tony

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diamond 22 January 2009

Good description of balance of things in life - 10 from me

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