Monday, April 27, 2009

Baldness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Baldness comes to men like me
And I am only twenty three
Few strands of hair upon my head
They know all the rest is dead
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Jim O'Donnell
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C. P. Sharma 02 March 2010

I appreciate your poetic skill and the sense of humour. It was joy gliding through your poem. CP

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Pamela Lutwyche 16 February 2010

I can’t sleep so I’m here and it’s 1 o’clock in the morning I’m just passing time I liked your poem Jim. It really is quite fine. I’m imagining you in the shower shampooing from head to toe. Sorry Jim I’m getting tired now, so I’ll say good night and go. Very good poem 10 from me

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Jim O'Donnell

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