I like this...it's a unique way of seeing an ordinary situation that stops it being ordinary. I also like the indifference of the window pane who only reflects whatever is happening outside. At least the bee has a point of view but he just can't seem to get through to the window pane. Again read with a smile but then again maybe you wrote it with a smile so even that comes through in your telling.
Gina XXX
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I like this...it's a unique way of seeing an ordinary situation that stops it being ordinary. I also like the indifference of the window pane who only reflects whatever is happening outside. At least the bee has a point of view but he just can't seem to get through to the window pane. Again read with a smile but then again maybe you wrote it with a smile so even that comes through in your telling. Gina XXX