Monday, July 2, 2007

Banging Your Head Against A Brick Wall Comments

Rating: 5.0

An irrate bee
having one hell of a row with a windowpane.

The bee continually raising its voice
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Dónall Dempsey
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Gina Pisapia 10 July 2007

I like this...it's a unique way of seeing an ordinary situation that stops it being ordinary. I also like the indifference of the window pane who only reflects whatever is happening outside. At least the bee has a point of view but he just can't seem to get through to the window pane. Again read with a smile but then again maybe you wrote it with a smile so even that comes through in your telling. Gina XXX

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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