Banging Your Head Against A Brick Wall Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Banging Your Head Against A Brick Wall

Rating: 5.0


An irrate bee
having one hell of a row with a windowpane.

The bee continually raising its voice
screams...now shouts
curses with all its might.

The windowpane says
absolutely nothing

remains calm.. .inscrutable.

The bee is a tightly packed
explosive argument
(a fuzzy bumbling logic) .

The windowpane
(you can almost see it thinking)

'Tree...green grass...blue sky...
...the joy of sunlight! '

It's as if it isn't
even listening

to what the bee is saying.

Suddenly the bee
keels over
like he's had a heartattack.

The window doesn't bat an eyelid
continues thinking:


'Tree...green grass...blue sky...
...the joy of sunlight! '

And just now...

'...a little wisp of cloud! '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Pisapia 10 July 2007

I like this...it's a unique way of seeing an ordinary situation that stops it being ordinary. I also like the indifference of the window pane who only reflects whatever is happening outside. At least the bee has a point of view but he just can't seem to get through to the window pane. Again read with a smile but then again maybe you wrote it with a smile so even that comes through in your telling. Gina XXX

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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