Barefoot Walk (Haiku) Poem by Jacqui Lempert

Barefoot Walk (Haiku)



Pat, pat, patting,
down the sidewalk slowly.
Walking barefooted.

Cell phone in pocket.
I am waiting for his call.
buzz, buzz, buzz, 'Hello? '

I wish he loved me.
Would I be good at loving?
I don't think I would.

Thinking to myself,
Barefoot walks are good to me,
but I'm not for him.

Friday, July 16, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marina Gasbey 16 July 2010

That poem is very sweet but very sad. Good job with the haiku style!

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