Barefooted Poem by My Lady Eagle

Barefooted

Rating: 5.0


It's...
Strange.
I feel no love.
I see no strangers-
There's only known faces:
Couples that were dancing.

Yes, the sunlight was romancing
In the late afternoon
And in my afternoon heart,
Which by midnight
Would be less as it seemed

For I will take notice
That I was walking on bare feet-
Without reaching
Her shores.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A beautiful poetic dance my friend...

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Kristoffer Randolf Ramos 08 April 2010

seems that love is miles away from u though u are fascinated by love of someone..

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a a 07 April 2010

More rhythmn less parraellel rhymes. Uv got good potential.

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My Lady Eagle

My Lady Eagle

Caloocan, Philippines
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