Carlos Rivera

Battle - Poem by Carlos Rivera

Life can be tough
but you have friends who care
nevermind those
who just laugh and point and stare

So dont through your life away
your friends will beg for you to stay

Dont fear
tell life to bring it on
have courage
cause life's battle's just begun

Comments about Battle by Carlos Rivera

  • Romeo Della Valle (4/17/2011 12:37:00 PM)

    You are absolutely right, we all have friends that for us care and You astoundingly talent with whole to share! Keep on writing my friend! Excellent write! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ... (Report) Reply

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  • Haven Cathleen ~can anyone see me~ (1/31/2011 10:09:00 AM)

    i agree with ash its a good poem and its true. very nice keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2010 11:51:00 AM)

    this is a good poem n its so true.... :)
    keep writin
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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 1, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 12, 2011

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