Battle Of Consciousness Poem by Drake Kinkaid

Battle Of Consciousness

Rating: 5.0


Taking the mind about them
Lost in their way of use
Their only path forward is the one they will lose
Now lost in another river of booze
The moment appears when they're alive in a sense
All they have now is a mind that is drenched
And the time that they play...
Is just the time they wither away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 09 November 2008

fine thought out.....penned beautifully! .....10+

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*Trusting You* 02 November 2008

I like the end to this one. and the lines Their only path forward is the one they will lose Now lost in another river of booze good job. *Purkey Girl*

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Sheetal V 26 October 2008

well said but by 'boose'... do you mean boos or booze...? ?

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