Out Of Our Body Poem by Drake Kinkaid
Out Of Our Body
Stumbling down the line of this realm to the next
We need to be ready to take on the long test
While all of the faces resemble the rest.....
Panchromatic eyes adjust to my vision
We wonder away to have the softest collision
Eyes are wild and our head even further
Tonight we are beast that are fulfilling the feed
Breathing uneasy..
Limbs tied together and we relax and feel the post tingle
One in one makes two, but you and I make only a single
Sharing thoughts without words
Sharing our being
I'm looking deep in her soul without even seeing.....
Regaining composure we drag down a trail
Hard to determine whether its heaven or hell
The greatest feeling to obtain is what gave us our night.
And we're in for the hours, but tomorrow will bring our minds back to light.....
hey, the way you observed and expressed, its nice! compact composition...10++++
This is amazing I cant help but say that it is truly the best I hae read in a while
I really like this line I'm looking deep in her soul without even seeing..... good job. *Purkey Girl*
Hazel i think maybe you misinterpreted the poem. i think it is in fact about the passing away of two lovers, who enter the afterlife as one soul combined, maybe deeper down implying that us on our own are incomplete, and only until we find our match on earth may we pass into the afterlife peacefully.... maybe this can even be considered the meaning of life, the unity of a man and woman. loved this poem, i had to read it over a few times to understand it. very well done and all the best! ROCCO
wow! i loved it, it was just an amazing and naughty poem great piece but even a greater writer! ~Hazel Green Eyes
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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its like a fantasy land come to life! xoxox