Battled Field Poem by Hanna Maria

Battled Field



The Quiet Quiet of the Night
Slowly steals the Will to Fight

Empty sheath from Broken sword
nowhere To Hide from the hordes

foggy Forests hide the Eyes
of the evils Deep Inside

Silent slithers follow Near
arousing deep Within, A fear

Coming close A voice it beckons
Foe or Friend cannot Be reckoned

Hidden soundless Lie in wait
Fear to anger than To Hate

Tears threaten, Brushed away
Gritted teeth, Cannot delay

A gentle touch, Familiar face
Calm the Fires, of this case

Tears spill o’r, head In Hands
Mourning those lost in These Lands

arms Come round, comfort Given
This place Not safe, but feels like Heaven

Friday, October 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: aftermath,battle,comforting,death,deaths,heaven,night,silence
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There is a hidden poem within this one, it's kinda weird without punctuation but i wonder if you can find it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 10 November 2015

Well, I could't really find the poem hidden inside this.. But I would have loved to.. Maybe there is something here with the casing of the words as some of them begin in capital... Interesting puzzle though... P: S: If you ever feel like giving away the answer please tell me :) Thank you for sharing Hanna :)

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Hanna Maria 07 January 2016

yes it does have to do with the capital letters :)

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Mark Bell 23 October 2015

Tip top Brilliant imagery Like the way it Is written

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